Moment in time

17/9/18

Name: Cameron

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).

Noun

Adjective

Draft 3

Title: The scary day

I heard everyone screaming with excitement as I walked up on the stage with fear because everyone was there and I have stage fright.

I saw my annoying Brother doing the introduction for the mass and he looked petrified as he was talking because he doesn't like being up on stage.

I felt a tingling feeling going down my spine as my bro started the haka with a loud booming roar.

I wonder if my piupiu (the store squirt) was going to fall down and everyone would start to burst out laughing because my piupiu was very big on my waste and it was falling down, I would be so